Doing Diversity in Writing

Season 1 Episode 11 - Not All Descriptions Are Created Equal

December 8, 2021

In this episode of Doing Diversity in Writing, we—Bethany and Mariëlle—conclude our conversation about marking the unmarked by discussing description. 


In this third episode on the topic, we discuss:

  • marking and unmarking in terms of description
  • the Twilight series and the problematic use of dark and light
  • why we, as writers, have to consistently ask ourselves what the outcome is of the descriptive choices we make


Some quotes from this week’s episode:


“Describing things as good or bad, welcoming or frightening, is done differently depending on history, religion, region, and the history that the people involved have.”


“The associations we create as authors need to be mindful, and we need to be watching for what kind of implications those descriptions can have.”


“As writers, when we’re looking at describing places, we need to consider who we’re placing in that place and how we want our readers to think about them. If we’re using terms like “high-crime” and “distressed”, that paints a certain picture of anyone we place in that area.”

And here are the (re)sources we mentioned on the show:

  • “‘Twilight’: How much money did all 5 movies make?” by Abeni Tinubu:


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